0 Essay Writing Tips 4 (How to write a good introduction)


Let’s look at some more essay questions to see how to restate the question and how to write your thesis statement.
               
TOEFL essay question #1:
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants.  Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.  Which do you prefer?  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Restatement & Thesis:
People have two options when deciding where to eat.  They can prepare meals and eat at home or they can go out to stands or restaurants.  I prefer to go out to eat because the food is more varied and interesting, it is less work for me and it saves time.

Analysis:
The restatement mentions the two types of options people have for eating and tells which one the author prefers.  In addition, it gives three reasons for that preference.  These three reasons will make up the three main idea paragraphs in the body of the essay.

TOEFL essay question #2:
Is it better for children to participate in team sports or individual sports?  Why?  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Restatement & Thesis:
It is better for children to participate in team sports rather than individual sports.  In team sports, children learn how to cooperate.  They learn good sportsmanship and how to rely on their teammates.  These are important lessons that will benefit children throughout their lives.

Analysis:
The first sentence clearly states the author’s opinion.  This is followed by three reasons for the opinion.  Finally, the author mentions life lessons.  In the essay, the three reasons will make up the three main idea paragraphs in the body of the essay.  In addition, the author will mention how each main idea is useful throughout life.

TOEFL essay question #3:
Some people prefer to live in a small town.  Others prefer to live in a big city.  Which place would you prefer to live in?  Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Restatement & Thesis:
There are many good reasons to live in a big city and an equal number of good reasons to live in a small town.  I, myself, prefer to live in a small town because it is more personal and homey; it is easier to get around in and it is safer than a big city.

Analysis:
The first statement says that both a city and town have positive aspects.  The next sentence tells the author’s preference and reasons for that preference.  These reasons will make up the body of the essay.



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